Things That Never Change
- My height
- My awkwardness
- Feeling like no one really understands
- Feeling like I’m different
- Wanting to help those two feel better when I know I can’t
- My love for My Chemical Romance
- Those nights I spent with him
- My weird ideas
- My belief in cryptids
- My hopes to become a novelist
- How perfect I feel in his arms
- How beautiful he makes me feel
- How human beings never cease to amaze me (for better or worse)
- My love for him
- My love for her
(5, 14, and 15.)
You never truly understand
Love
Until you meet a person who
Amazes you
You’ve never met a girl like her
You’ve never met a guy like him
In many ways they are
Alike
I love them
In many ways they are different
Very different pains
I wish I could heal their wounds
Hers inflicted by Man
His inflicted by Mind
I love my two
A man
A woman
Is love so strict,
I cannot love without lust?
He has my love
She has my love
I want to marry him
I want to safeguard her
I love my two darlings
This is quite an interesting poem. It sounds like the speaker is quite conflicted between these two people. At first I wasn't sure if these were "romantic" loves or what....but then I read the line about lust. I love that part "Is love so strict,/ I cannot live without lust?" I also love:
ReplyDeleteI wish I could heal their wounds
Hers inflicted by Man
His inflicted by Mind
I like how you incorporate characters into the poem with conflicts even though the major conflict is that of the speaker's.
Nice job.
Yayy Sierra :) it's awesome. It's weird because of the love you show towards the guy and the friendship you show towards the girl :)
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